After your day of fishing

as we danced you told me
about your day, the breakfast
the people and the sausages

we waltzed on the carpet
hands held then you twirled me
about you, the tv on but we talked

and I could smell the scent of lake
and catch on your cheek
as we danced in the living room

you kissed me on my cheek
told me you loved me more
our end to the day was complete

with you dancing the minutes
knitting it back together
with hands and feet and lips

I thought it was about time someone got the ball rolling, so here is my piece from our recent meeting.

Ian

Closing Time

On the day they announced your demise, I walked between your aisles a few minutes before closing time, following the scars on the pale grey linoleum, where millions of feet had tramped and thousands of  buggies had been pushed.

I filled a bag with pic’n’mix for old-times sake, and observed your employees, pale-faced in their red jackets, lost souls wandering around in glazed silence, aligning some item on a shelf here, tidying a display there, purely out of habit.

Your automatic doors opened and closed of their own volition it would seem, unsure whether they should be letting customers in or keeping them out. And in the December twilight, I imagined the ghosts of a thousand shoppers, stretching back through your hundred-year history, herding in to say their final farewells.

In a flash-back, I felt my childhood excitement, perusing your shelves in search of a new outfit for my Action Man, before, as an extra treat, being taken to the ice cream parlour next door for a knickerbocker glory with hot butterscotch topping. 

It was then I remembered that you sold me my first long-playing record. ‘Top of the Pops’ it was called, if I remember correctly, and contained songs that had recently been chart hits. It was only when I got home and played it that I realised the songs were performed, not by the original artists, but by impostors. My mother, sensing my disappointment, took it back and demanded a refund. 

Where will we go now, I asked myself, making my way towards the forlorn woman at the checkout, to buy those things that fix electrical cable to the wall? And that plastic coated stretchy wire that holds up net curtains? Where will we go for cola bottles, fizz bombs, liquorice snakes and mini fried eggs? And metre-long chocolate bars and giant Quality Street at Christmas? Where will we go for that silver-backed tape, those self-adhesive rubber things that hold tea towels, and cheap CDs containing a hundred Motown hits from the sixties?

They couldn’t even sell you for a quid, I hear, the price that your usurpers - Poundland, Pound Stretcher, et al - purvey their out-of-date and sub-standard goods. And when it came to the crunch, you, the original ‘five-and-dime’, were hoisted by your own petard. 

I wanted to be the one who could say he didn’t hover with the vultures and partake in the feeding frenzy that occurred in the days before your automatic doors flapped shut for the last time. But I’m afraid I can’t; I found myself queueing among the greedy hordes to  buy a packet of dust masks and some half-price beige emulsion that has still to find a wall.

Now, as I wander my High Street, I can’t help but feel that something is missing, even though I rarely stepped through your doors. I observe your empty shell and watch the clearers using your scarred grey floor as a football pitch. I stop momentarily to read the plain printed sign, stuck with Blu Tack to your window, which says: ‘We are now closed forever’. 

more competitions so get writing....

Deadline 31st May

FROGMORE POETRY PRIZE
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FROME FESTIVAL SHORT STORY COMP
1000-2200 words
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YEOVIL LITERARY PRIZE
2000 words or novel or poem
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GOOD LUCK!!!!

fishy stories

Following our successful bout of fish related stories at writing group, take 'the dumbfounded eyes of minnows' and run with it, Genista told us; so we did.
Later that week I was chatting to my nan (the wise one or yoda as i like to call her) and I was harping (or should that be carping) on about how some people had booked flights for 1p, yes 1p! To which my nan replied, 'a sprat to catch a mackerel'.

'A SPRAT TO CATCH A MACKEREL'

Make a story out of that one if you dare....

bear with us....

A new project and one hopefully that will get off the ground in the current economic climate! The wonders of having writing as a hobby is that you have a relatively cost-free outlay, i.e. pen, paper (ok and a computer if you want to flash it up on a blog like this - but most libraries let you use them for free). And books, yeah, books are everywhere, an abundant resource at your fingertips and so deliciously stocked almost anywhere. So no excuse really. Get writing.

In the near future I'm hoping to enlist the help of the Somerset Writers to bulk out this blog and tell you all about our varied and interesting pieces of work, events and activities. (The last two might be one and the same thing but I can't be bothered to edit right now)

Toodlepip for now....